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Sunday, October 5, 2008

Nature Lesson

Sedges have edges and
rushes are round and
grasses, like asses,
have holes in the middle.

didn't you always want to know?
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3 comments:

  1. alissaOctober 6, 2008 at 4:45 PM

    i love it, but it doesn't rhyme!! i really want it to rhyme.

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  2. slim pickinsOctober 6, 2008 at 7:45 PM

    hm...a challenge.

    sedges have edges and
    rushes are round and
    grasses, when blown,
    make a hollow-y sound.

    maybe? dan's comment is that he appreciates that although it doesn't rhyme, it has "good alliteration and assonance."
    wakka wakka

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  3. alissaOctober 7, 2008 at 9:12 AM

    ohhhh. thats good! i'm not cultured and edumacated enough to appreciate anything but rhyming.
    if it don't rhyme,
    don't waste my time.
    thats what i say.

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