i love it, but it doesn't rhyme!! i really want it to rhyme.
hm...a challenge.sedges have edges andrushes are round and grasses, when blown, make a hollow-y sound.maybe? dan's comment is that he appreciates that although it doesn't rhyme, it has "good alliteration and assonance." wakka wakka
ohhhh. thats good! i'm not cultured and edumacated enough to appreciate anything but rhyming. if it don't rhyme, don't waste my time. thats what i say.
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