Sunday, October 5, 2008

Nature Lesson

Sedges have edges and
rushes are round and
grasses, like asses,
have holes in the middle.

didn't you always want to know?

3 comments:

alissa said...

i love it, but it doesn't rhyme!! i really want it to rhyme.

slim pickins said...

hm...a challenge.

sedges have edges and
rushes are round and
grasses, when blown,
make a hollow-y sound.

maybe? dan's comment is that he appreciates that although it doesn't rhyme, it has "good alliteration and assonance."
wakka wakka

alissa said...

ohhhh. thats good! i'm not cultured and edumacated enough to appreciate anything but rhyming.
if it don't rhyme,
don't waste my time.
thats what i say.